tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post174648192833928943..comments2024-02-05T15:01:44.563-05:00Comments on Cleveland Poetics: a place for cleveland's writers and readers: Blind Review Fridaymichael salingerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14717310933948991992noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-77954444220788288132010-07-09T20:43:24.968-04:002010-07-09T20:43:24.968-04:00One of the more interesting things I've read i...One of the more interesting things I've read in a while.<br /><br />A little saliency or connective tissue, to point the reader a little more one way or another may make it a stronger piece. It feels like a glimpse or a shadow out of the corner of your eye and you want to bring it into focus.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-22417060308677512782010-07-09T15:37:30.631-04:002010-07-09T15:37:30.631-04:00I like the punctuation that you used. The frequen...I like the punctuation that you used. The frequent use of periods makes reading the poem sound as though your breath is catching. As though the intensity of your thinking about your actions is making it tough for you to speak. Definitely fits the mood of the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com