tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post8227647799561854254..comments2024-02-05T15:01:44.563-05:00Comments on Cleveland Poetics: a place for cleveland's writers and readers: Blind Review Fridaymichael salingerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14717310933948991992noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-31793297575549104692009-06-05T19:42:27.811-04:002009-06-05T19:42:27.811-04:00for me what stirs are the sound and syllable--writ...for me what stirs are the sound and syllable--writ with a precision much like the subjects in the poem are precise. mundane, and beuatiful in its thrift and aim.Pressin Onhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02875715937095082907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-44642055531017167682009-05-31T10:22:40.504-04:002009-05-31T10:22:40.504-04:00However well-crafted this poem might be (and it is...However well-crafted this poem might be (and it is), it bores me. I've read it over 4 or 5 times, each time hoping that I'd find something in the poem that would stir some feeling or thought in me, but it just doesn't do it for me.Shelley Cherninhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10132631136708521168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-51739370562141771682009-05-29T21:30:08.878-04:002009-05-29T21:30:08.878-04:00this is a great example of why i love rhyming poet...this is a great example of why i love rhyming poetry. it is beautifulll scenery! thanks!Pressin Onhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02875715937095082907noreply@blogger.com