tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post1424996558279074899..comments2024-02-05T15:01:44.563-05:00Comments on Cleveland Poetics: a place for cleveland's writers and readers: Blind Review Fridaymichael salingerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14717310933948991992noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-90749419229393478202009-02-27T11:33:00.000-05:002009-02-27T11:33:00.000-05:00Say, I like this one. It avoids sentimentality.No...Say, I like this one. It avoids sentimentality.<BR/><BR>Not sure I have much in the way of comments. Perhaps the last two stanzas (the only six-line stanzas) make the metaphor a little too explicitly, and could be shortened a little-- on the other hand, I do like the last couplet.<BR/><BR>Good work-- this one's a keeper.Geoffrey A. Landishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04518496779546782434noreply@blogger.com