tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post3576123551603695716..comments2024-02-05T15:01:44.563-05:00Comments on Cleveland Poetics: a place for cleveland's writers and readers: Blind Review Fridaymichael salingerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14717310933948991992noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-57983657074388792502009-06-06T22:57:34.263-04:002009-06-06T22:57:34.263-04:00Thanks -- this is an old poem, but one that still ...Thanks -- this is an old poem, but one that still has some resonance for me. For some reason or other I often think of at least the premise of a poem while I'm in the dentist's chair --<br /><br />Thanks for the comments. They are helpful.Mary Turzillohttp://www.maryturzillo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-12305820716231497912009-05-24T10:13:09.607-04:002009-05-24T10:13:09.607-04:00There's a lot of story here in just a few lines, w...There's a lot of story here in just a few lines, which I admire.<br /><br />The last two lines would have been more powerful for me if I had seen the child's curiosity in the preceding stanzas. I had no idea that the child was feeling curious until the poet told me.Shelley Cherninhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10132631136708521168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-3068101060586570352009-05-23T13:19:06.400-04:002009-05-23T13:19:06.400-04:00i love the image of the universe's entrails.
very...i love the image of the universe's entrails.<br /><br />very nice.Theresa Göttl Brightmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04268724583965572272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5641117771707843067.post-69122504818827551702009-05-22T18:14:57.644-04:002009-05-22T18:14:57.644-04:00Say, I liked it.
I'd like to get a feel for the ...Say, I liked it. <br /><BR>I'd like to get a feel for the age of the kid, thoughGeoffrey A. Landishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04518496779546782434noreply@blogger.com