Check out the following. Local poet Dianne Borsenik has a haiku in the weekly update from Issa's Untidy Hut:
http://lilliputreview.blogspot.com/2012/02/diane-borsenik-and-john-stokes.html
Borsenik's haiku is an example of how to make the most out of minimal language. The kigo--"full moon"--refers traditionally to Autumn, a season of slowing down and loss, as well as longing and memory. Borsenik's use of "spill" and "white" connotes the cliche adage, "Don't cry over spilt milk," but successfully navigates around using all but the most spare of allusions. Thus, readers are put into a scene of loss, unresolvable loss perhaps, which is juxtaposed against the austere beauty of light from the full moon.
Quite a moving and resonant haiku.
5 comments:
Well said, Mr. Gage.
Congratulations, Dianne!
This is a lovely piece. Excellent haiku.
Very evocative piece. Congratulations, Dianne!
Congratulations Dianne
much love...
Thanks to Don Wentworth for publishing my haiku, to Josh Gage for reviewing it, and to John Burroughs, T. M. Göttl, J. E. Stanley, and Gillena Cox for the lovely comments- you've all made my birthday one of the best ever!
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